I am writing this essay to evaluate the effectiveness of the LCD monitor manual .
First of all, I would like to list some measures of excellence that this manual possesses
- Clatity: I think it has done quite well because I can see clearly what it is about
- Accessibility: it mark the page number of each section so we can read easily what we want to read
- Conciseness: the section which explain how to install the machine quite clear, presented with figure and not too long. We can get the idea without scamming all the paper.
- Professional Appearance: I fell that the writer is quite a professional
- Correctness: I can’t see any grammar and spelling error in the document.
Besides, there are still something needed to be improved: it is the size of the words. Some section is written in too small size like safety instruction or troubleshooting. And, I think they should include the phone number of every of its local sale spot to make it more convenient.
you have the good idea but the exercise requires to describe the manual. i cannot understand what the manual and how it works. You need describe more about that
Trả lờiXóaNguyen Quang Minh 08ece
Well done, I'm agree with your idea that your manual is clarity, professional and correct.
Trả lờiXóaHowever, your 14 pages- manual is really so long.
It will take a lot of time to make the conclusion about this manual.
And you still have an error spell on your article."clatity" is a wrong word, it must be " clarity".
( Doãn Hà Tiên 09ECE).