Here is the advertisement from translation service from exercise 2, page 93.
If your technical documents have meet the needs of global market but you find that most translation houses are swamped by huge volume, fail to accommodate the various languages your require, or make your deadlines, where do you turn?
Well, your search is over. Translations, Inc. provides comprehensive translation in addition to full-service documentation publishing.
We utilize ultra-sophisticated translation program that can translate a page in the blink of an eye. Then our crack linguist comb each document to give it that personalized touch
No job too large! No schedule to tight! Give us a call today!
I will revise the passage to make it more appropriate for a multicultural audience.
My memo
Dear Mr. ….
By your admission, we know that you may have some technical documents that meet the needs of global market. And it will become better if your documents are translated to other languages. By this way it will allow the reader around the world can access your technical documents.
But most translation houses are swamped by huge volume, fail to accommodate the various languages which your require, or make your deadlines.
Thus we, the Translations, Inc. provide comprehensive translation in addition to full-service documentation publishing. We utilize ultra-sophisticated translation program that can translate a page in the blink of an eye. Then our crack linguist combs each document to give it that personalized touch.
Please give us a call at any time you need us to translate your documents. We will never make you disappointed with our service.
Thank for reading.
Sincerely.
Translation, Inc.
I think this is a great modification.
Trả lờiXóayour structure sepateted in many part : the need of the product, the disadvantage of other product then introduce the advertisement product.The structure is really great.
However, i think you should nut include the first part because this is an advertisement, not a letter
Although, you really did a good job here.
well done^^
(Hai Nam , 09ece)
I total agree what Nam had said. You do a good job i can understand what you said clearly and easily
Trả lờiXóaNguyen Quang Minh